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Joey vs david rap-king

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Joey vs david rap-king

Post by Admin on Mon Sep 07, 2015 7:02 pm

___*~*~*~*IBRF_PRESENTS*~*~*___--
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_________THE_TIME_NOW!!!__________
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#Joey_Khatel VS David Rap-King Abubekr
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.
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#Rules.
.
#48hours
#No_bittin'
#No_recyclin'
#No_feeding_or_spamin'
#No_8_bars_max
#No_rebbutals..
#Admins
#Joey.!!!



Joey Khatel
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#SORRY_FOR_THE_WAIT..
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.
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When I spit., I drill so I'm done MAKING ONE
KNIFE.. So its
8bars.. one target... still(steel) TAKING ONE
LIFE.!!.. Like
The cease(disease) ....BREAKING HIS TONE,.
So when "David be king".. It time for SOLO
mourn(solomon).... Kuz I'm TAKING HIS
THRONE.!!!
.
.»Y'all know the bible story of david and
solomon..«
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Y'all know I'm no fag..buh Str8..... Kuz I'm
GRIPPING RIGID WAGES..... And....SCRIPTING
IN LIVID STAGES...... So when I'm ready to kill
him., Be own mah chaplet.,And be .....FLIPPING
VIVID PAGES....
.
.. Pull mah chopper.,be on scarlet.,...And be......
RIPPING DAVID IN PHRASES...and KIPPING HIM
IN FRIGID CASES.!!
.
Its really funny kuz..each time I script? I'll be
EQUIPPING ZEAL...
When it comes to "contract killing".. I'm
GRIPPING STEEL...
So when ths David tokin' shit?..
Gat me feelin' like I've gatto SMITE OR PEEL....
Even the judges know I've gat the RIGHT TO
KILL..
.
So I'll...
Lay him on mah lap.. Give this UNCLEAN
MONKEY STROKES...
Make him go on his kneel(neil)... Kuz mah arm
strong(armstrong)..... Force his face to the
ground..make his Ass throw nut(astronaut) and
ion..MEAN DONKEY JOKES.!!
.»Neil armstrong/first astronaut«..
.
You lost to chima.,..that's was a clear
WRAPAROUND...
...Buh I'm afraid I've gat something worse.. Like
a SPELLBOUND......so when I Put him in his
right place? then mah "punches" hit "per
cell" (parcel)....like a SENDER FREE MAIL......and
make him "see men"(semen) like a
TRANSGENDER FEMALE.!!
.
See I PERFORM GOOD AND QUAKE
CHECKS.....!!.....like WORM WOOD I'LL MAKE
WRECKS...........so if "david" FORM RUDE,I'LL
AWAKE TECHS.. ........And STORM(his) HOOD
AND BREAK NECKS!!! ..
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Obviously..
When I drop its tagged "STRAIGHT A'S
MASTERS"... This neygers's jez a ..CHEAT WITH
C5 DIPLOMA... Made a C'O as a BAIT HE ATE
DISASTER....I'm done,zip him up.. Kuz
paramedics KITS CAN'T REVIVE HIS COMA...
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.
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#Am_done
#Joey







David Rap-King Abubekr
CHRONICLES OF A PIMP


\||||/
( •_•)Me
∫\ \____( •o•)Your mum
_∫∫ _∫∫ɯ \ \

Lyrical rape


:::::Mic mic Mic:::::™
Check


trap Joey below my "keyboard", I got him
under "ctrl"(control),, why am I up against an
alcohol addict who asks NASA where to find
"SPACE BAR"??//
Battle me,u gon emerge with a thousand sores,
multiple cuts, and huge permanent FACE
SCAR//
Then feed u to savaging vultures just so u
disapear without a TRACE BRUH//
Cos u the type to go to the olympics to try and
participate in the human RACE HUH//
Why do u claim to be gangster when u wearing
a crop top and holding a purse that matches
your g-string and LACE BRA
Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!
How do u expect to slay me, I reached puberty
when I was a zygot, was born with hair around
my ARMPIT AND BALLS//
I hate u cos u didn't invite me to your bday
party, u fucking bitch with a LARGE CLIT WITH
SORES//
U better QUIT THIS WAR//
U leaving this battle as a [fried vet], shut up,,
Your nail polish aint [dried yet]. I JAB HITS IN
BRAWLS//
U the type to scream, faint, get up and ask for
an autograph on your left tit when u see BRAD
PITT IN MALLS
Here's a convo I heard between Ricky and
Joey..
Ricky:::::::::: don't talk to me and Olaleye, we
dumping u, we now your X-men, and I don't
mean CYCLOPS AND WOLVERINE//
Joey:::::::::: but babes, I already bought our
costumes, we dressing up as GAY COPS THIS
HALOWEEN///
Ricky::::::::::nigger, "bounce" outa my life like a
DROP ON TRAMPOLINE//:
Joey:::::::::: ok fine, there are plenty of fish in
the sea, and tonight I will hala at my new lover
Leslie Saint, and CHOP ONE SARDINE///
Football?? Ayt, observe
Beating me? U don't even LUKE SHAW(look
sure) cos Ima bring HARRY KANE(hurricane) to
SLAY THIS FOOL//
This Giroud(gee rude). He thinks
"martial"(marshall) arts is an "eminem"
drawing. Dumbass, STAY IN SCHOOL//
Everything u SAY IS BULL//
Your dream is to have a "man united" with u
sexually..and I know your ass hurting,, but u
tryna PLAY IT COOL//
Have mercy,, hell no!!!!
Fuck all Samurais, IRBF is a GRIM THRONE///
Move like a butterfly?I move like light rays and
give you a thousand jabs in less than 10secs
around your CHIN ZONE//
This boy claim he richer than me, while my
pockets stay "fat" like there's no GYM KNOWN//
Check his pic,, Nigger soo dark, I got black
shoes lighter than his SKIN TONE// t
Mayne!!!!!!!!
Nigger tryna be a serial(cereal) killing by
stabbing CORN FLAKES... Bitch, I BLOW MINDS//
I suck venom from shredded scorpions and
TORN SNAKES,, while u in strip clubs doing
SLOW GRINDS//
500 gigabyte is the space on yo pc that only gay
PORN TAKES.. U soo ugly, a 2 minute stare at
your face, ima GO BLIND//
I THROW RHYMES, FLOW LINES and GROW
SHRINES while u get ready to give an
"autograph" in math class when u hear tangents
and CO SINES(sign)
BLUH!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Joey vs david rap-king

Post by Admin on Mon Sep 07, 2015 7:03 pm

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Re: Joey vs david rap-king

Post by Admin on Mon Sep 07, 2015 9:55 pm

Apex Da Essence Illtrix
:::::VERDICTS::::
[Before Verds Are Dropped I'd Like To State
That Catching Feelings Is Not Allowed]
OPENER : DAVID, see Khatel was just rhyming
in his opener, whereas David started throwing
Jabs from the Get Go
MULTIES : TIE , Yoh Joey best believe there are
some multisyllables in ur verse that were too
stretched, i understand that its a facebook
textbattle norm to come up with 99 syllables
on a single rhyme but that shit will get u killed
in real life, there are some countries where
they actually hang people for that shit...& David
some of ur multies also didnt actually rhyme
with ur preceeding lines, even though the
syllable count was equal the sounds didnt
fucking match....u started nicely with ur opener
coz u werent trying to fit in as many syllables as
u could
DELIVERY : TIE , both of y'all executed ur lines
nicely
FLOW : JOEY , that shit flowed nicely, David's
bars were kinda stretched so David aint getting
shit on this criteria
HUMOUR :DAVID , That Convo Sealed It
PUNCHES : DAVID , it was clear David had
better punches compared to Joey
PERSONALS : DAVID.....Once more i dont think
Joey really attacked David to the fullest extent,
it was more like Joey talking about himself,
whereas David really went at Joey hard & yeah
theres that Pic
WORDPLAY : DAVID , look there was an entire
bar just for wordplay (where he flipped the
names of football players) & theres also that
"martial arts" line.....He had almost triple the
amount of wordplay on his verse compared to
Joey
SIMILES : JOEY , David's verse was more about
wordplay & not juxtapositions so he aint getting
shit on this criteria
CLOSER : DAVID , using Alternating rhymes on
that bar was pretty dope & the punches were
quite effective
[Dope Brawl , though Joey didnt come hard at
David , he had a better flow & a pretty tight
verse but its like he wasnt really attacking
David, the Flow on David's verse wasnt that
good but he did attack Joey on practically every
line ]
>>>>MVGT : DAVID<<<<
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Re: Joey vs david rap-king

Post by Admin on Mon Sep 07, 2015 9:57 pm

Apex Da Essence Illtrix
:::::VERDICTS::::
[Before Verds Are Dropped I'd Like To State
That Catching Feelings Is Not Allowed]
OPENER : DAVID, see Khatel was just rhyming
in his opener, whereas David started throwing
Jabs from the Get Go
MULTIES : TIE , Yoh Joey best believe there are
some multisyllables in ur verse that were too
stretched, i understand that its a facebook
textbattle norm to come up with 99 syllables
on a single rhyme but that shit will get u killed
in real life, there are some countries where
they actually hang people for that shit...& David
some of ur multies also didnt actually rhyme
with ur preceeding lines, even though the
syllable count was equal the sounds didnt
fucking match....u started nicely with ur opener
coz u werent trying to fit in as many syllables as
u could
DELIVERY : TIE , both of y'all executed ur lines
nicely
FLOW : JOEY , that shit flowed nicely, David's
bars were kinda stretched so David aint getting
shit on this criteria
HUMOUR :DAVID , That Convo Sealed It
PUNCHES : DAVID , it was clear David had
better punches compared to Joey
PERSONALS : DAVID.....Once more i dont think
Joey really attacked David to the fullest extent,
it was more like Joey talking about himself,
whereas David really went at Joey hard & yeah
theres that Pic
WORDPLAY : DAVID , look there was an entire
bar just for wordplay (where he flipped the
names of football players) & theres also that
"martial arts" line.....He had almost triple the
amount of wordplay on his verse compared to
Joey
SIMILES : JOEY , David's verse was more about
wordplay & not juxtapositions so he aint getting
shit on this criteria
CLOSER : DAVID , using Alternating rhymes on
that bar was pretty dope & the punches were
quite effective
[Dope Brawl , though Joey didnt come hard at
David , he had a better flow & a pretty tight
verse but its like he wasnt really attacking
David, the Flow on David's verse wasnt that
good but he did attack Joey on practically every
line ]
>>>>MVGT : DAVID<<<<
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